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04-25-2007, 08:17 PM (This post was last modified: 05-19-2007 02:12 PM by Corry.)
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hey dear friends,

i've written one poem this week. but actually it isn't a poem, i'd better say lyrics because i also figured out melody and how to play guitar with it. well, i haven't finished this thing with guitar yet - and i also can't write the chords, only read them a bit Wink and i anyway play it more in my way, so we can't really talk about chords here. but if i figure out how i'd play it on piano then i can write it down - that's what i can

well, let me give you the lyrics:Smile

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Oh I shall sing you a song
And night, night is fallin'
Oh it won't take too long –
'till all colours have gone

But dream, dream oh dream on –
I can already see:
BLUE, RED GREEN and YELLOW
Oh with you it's nice to BE

And night BLUE sky so gentle as YOU my love
Your RED lips SPREAD WINE on MINE
GREEN GRASS beneath US
YELLOW SUN – shines through our hearts
YELLOW SUN – together, oh together – it's nice to BE
… in darkness and on light -
… for ever to BE -
with you – to BE -
as one – you see
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04-28-2007, 10:50 AM
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Nice one, I like it. Wink

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04-28-2007, 03:23 PM
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Nice Poem Sunny Ana. Wink

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04-28-2007, 04:39 PM
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Great poemWinkWinkWink

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04-28-2007, 04:55 PM
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Great one... beautifullWink

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04-28-2007, 05:56 PM
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Wonderful......Pray

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04-28-2007, 08:31 PM
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Wink thank you everybody, i'm happy you like my lyrics; it's the first time i've figured out lyrics on the whole, normaly i write poems, without music and all.
... so when i take a shower i can sing my own song (and everybody around can take a rest from the kelly-songs which i usually sing) Roflmao
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04-28-2007, 08:32 PM
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the lyric sounds very nice...i wish I
could hear the melody,too...
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04-28-2007, 08:38 PM
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I love it very much! Roflmao
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04-29-2007, 01:55 AM
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Great poem @Sunny. Wonderful !! Ylinlove





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04-29-2007, 06:13 PM
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You've been floating
between living and dying.

You've been floating
between despair and hope.

You've been floating
when you attempted suicide last time.

How many times have you tried
to kill yourself and to erase your life?
You've always underdosed the pills
that were meant to take you out.

You've been floating
between laughing and crying.

You've been floating
between sadness and joy.

You've been floating
when you tried to get things straight.

How many times have you tried
to kill yourself and to erase your life?
You've always underdosed the pills
that were meant to take you out.

Girl,
probably this is,how you cry for help.
But I dunno,how to lend a hand.
I'm losing my temper,cuz I feel weak
and I don't want to let you go.
All I can do is standing by your side
whatever may happen with you.

I'm floating,
because I don't know
when it's behind time
to say goodbye.
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04-29-2007, 06:59 PM
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It's a very sad and strong poem or rather a song. Thank you for sharing!
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04-29-2007, 07:06 PM (This post was last modified: 04-29-2007 07:07 PM by restless.)
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GabyKelly Wrote:It's a very sad and strong poem or rather a song. Thank you for sharing!
I'm not quite sure if it's a song or a poem Wink
But thank you very much...the poem just came to my mind today.
I use to write very much,because I love poetry and it means a lot to me,when ppl like my poems.
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04-30-2007, 08:30 AM
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It's a very thoughing and beautiful poem Wink Thanks for sharing with us. Wink





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05-02-2007, 04:09 PM
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..ana..i really like the songsWink

..restless..it´s really sad, but on the other hand very beautiful poem, keep on workingWink

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05-02-2007, 07:17 PM
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Ana beautifull poem,and great!!Wink

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05-04-2007, 11:43 PM
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oh my god, this is really great
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05-05-2007, 02:46 AM
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I remember the past so brightly
and it makes me sad to realize
that you've been passing by:

The very last lullaby.

It's time to leave the past behind
and to look for calmer pathways
where a ray of hope is close-by:

The very last lullaby.

Ultimately our very last goodbye
and it was never suspected that
it might come so secret and soon:

The very last lullaby.

We thought time would last forever
and we felt so ordinary and save
when you have started to croon:

The very last goodbye is done.
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05-05-2007, 07:41 PM
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:knuddel:Very beautiful!! Thank you!
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05-06-2007, 01:25 AM
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Beautiful poem @Restless. Thanks for sharing it with us. Wink





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