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05-06-2007, 08:02 AM
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Restless Great poem beautifullSmileSmile

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05-06-2007, 11:59 AM
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restless, beautiful!!! i love the 2. one.. really AMAZING

i have one new from yesterday as well, a bit phatetic but let me write it down:
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A foot in a shoe-
without getting a blister
after a long day under the endless blue ...

... oh - NOW - give me the glue!!
I want to glue my foot in your shoe!

... As for the day - it's passing by
(even slowlier than life itself)
Life - full of days ending under the endless blue
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05-19-2007, 02:52 PM
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Oh I love your poem dear..it's really wonderful. YlinloveYlinlove





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05-19-2007, 11:05 PM
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Girls Fantastic poemsAniheartBabydust It's always so great to read themWink

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05-20-2007, 11:42 AM
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Beautifull poem great!!!!!WinkWink

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06-09-2007, 10:33 AM (This post was last modified: 06-09-2007 10:34 AM by Julisa.)
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here are two songs of mine... a little depressive I know... but one of them is written in a psychiatric hospital (the first one) =(

The lonely prisoner (04.03.07)

1) Sitting at the window
looking outside
knowing she can’t leave the house
to go for a ride.
Sittign there so thoughtful
Feeling boring feeling blue
She is the lonely prisoner
Doesn’t know what to do

Refrain:
Screaming without noise
Talking without voice
Crying without a single tear
She’s a prisoner in here!

2) Walking up and down the floor
everything is new.
Birds are singing in the trees
And the sky is blue.
She can’t show her feelings
And she can’t cry her tears
The prisoner is waiting
That someone takes her fears.

3) Her thoughts are running circles
and now she is in bed.
There are so many troubles
Running through her head.
She doesn’t know how long to stay
And how to take the shame.
She’s just a lonely prisoner
The others feel the same.

Ending:
Even if the sun is shining
She always sees a cloud.
Even if nobody hears her
she’s often screaming loud.
Even if the doors are open
She feels like they are not.
The lonely prisoner is sad
And she prays to god.


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The sun don’t shine for me anymore (20.11.06)

1. I feel kind of angry, I feel kind of bad,
I feel kind of crazy, a little bit mad,
Yes I do…
I’m not really suffering,
I’m not really crying,
I’m not really dieing,
I just fell asleep, don’t wonder…

Refrain:
The sun don’t shine for me anymore!
Where ever I go there’s no open door!
I sit there sadly on the floor
And don’t know what for.

2. I feel kind of boring, I feel kind of strange,
I feel kind of stressed, you know, it does change,
Yes it does…
I’m not really helpless,
I’m just a bit lonely
And I am only
A little confused, don’t wonder…

Refrain

3. I feel kind of dizzy, I feel kind of ill,
I feel I’m to powerless to climb the hill,
Yes I am...
I’m not really calling,
I’m only screaming,
I’m only dreaming,
My thoughts running circles, don’t wonder…

Refrain


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06-09-2007, 11:16 AM
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Great poem @Julia....I've really missed your wonderful poems. Wink





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06-09-2007, 01:14 PM
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thank you a lot Knuddel

(they're songs!^^)


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07-12-2007, 05:47 PM
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wow, great words... it is so nice, to read it Knuddel

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08-02-2007, 04:46 AM (This post was last modified: 08-02-2007 04:47 AM by apsongbird.)
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OK this is a poem that I wrote 2 weeks ago.
I wrote it cause I was going through some hard times.
And I still am.
But here is is.

Untitled

I'm stuck in a dark room.
I can't breath and I can't hear.
All I can do is smell and feel.
I feel a dirty graveled floor.
I smell a eary and a musty sent
I felt around the walls.
There were no doors or windows.

What should I do?
How do I get out?

As I felt the floor, I felt A tool boxes.
I opened it with a long sqqeeeccckkkk.
As I reach in, I cute my self on something sharp.
Lerking is side, I see four things.
Pulling out a razor, a bag of weed, Alcohol, and a key.
With the key I see a golden gate.
The golden gets were gates to heaven.

Wich one should I chose.
I'll make my chose....


I hope you like my poem.
But please if you hate it please keep that to your self...
Cause that is personal to me, and it will hurt me.
Please and thanxsHappy
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08-02-2007, 08:30 AM
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Of course we don't hate it sweetie...It's a wonderful poem.
I hope you're feeling better and not so sad anymore. Remember that there will be always sunshine after the rain. Hugs for you my dear. KnuddelKnuddel





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08-02-2007, 11:57 PM
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Thanxs @Corry.
Just as like Paddy said I need to Pray pray pray for a happier day.Big Grin
I hope It will come to an end one day.
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08-06-2007, 10:03 AM
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My dear boyfriend will go to USA soon... for half a year Sad
and this is the song I wrote for him and I'll give it to him when he goes away Smile

I'll be with you (24.07.07)

You've packed all you bags
they are at the door
you leave the house
don't turn back anymore
The airport is reached
and soon you will depart
you give your baggage away
somehow it's hard
but

When you hear this song
then it won't take long
and I'll be with you
When you are alone
wanna be at home
then don't feel blue
cause I'll be with you

No you've arrived
your rucksack in your hand
now you're a lonesome boy
in a foreign land
Your family comes
you hope that they're ok
now you comprehend:
you're so far away
and

When you hear this song
then it won't take long
and I'll be with you
When you are alone
wanna be at home
then don't feel blue
cause I'll be with you

The first week's over now
and you feel satisfied
sure you miss your love ones
above all at night
But everybody here
is so nice to you
they all want your best
because everything is so new

When you hear this song
then it won't take long
and I'll be with you
When you are alone
wanna be at home
then don't feel blue
cause I'll be with you
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08-06-2007, 10:11 AM
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@Julisa...your song is beautiful as always your songs are. I love it. YlinloveYlinlove





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08-11-2007, 08:24 AM
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Wow amazing.
So beautiful.
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08-22-2007, 07:21 PM
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another one:

Stranger (22.8.2007)

Everywhere I go, I feel separate
And I just don’t know who has create
This feeling in my soul
People are starring at me
You can’t pretend what it’s like to be
Living inside a pearl of glass

I’m a stranger, stranger …

Like the one black sheep in a flock of whites
Being afraid of keeping and defending my rights
Is a real existing fear
I sometimes feel like a coloured dog
Surrounded by a cloud of fog,
Somehow special, somehow not

I’m a strange, stranger …

It is not every day that I feel like this
And also I can’t say what’s the thing I miss
It’s an illness without pain
My mirror tells me honest and wise:
You’re not different than the other guys
But I often can’t believe

Cause I’m a stranger, stranger …

A stranger in this world, it’s so hard to find a word,
I’m my own enemy, it is true, can’t you see,
I’m a stranger …


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08-22-2007, 08:36 PM
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Wowww..it's so great @Julisa. A bit sad but really beautiful. YlinloveYlinlove





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11-30-2007, 11:33 PM
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Wow!! There's really great work in here! Smile I loved reading through it all!

I haven't written anything for many, many weeks. But here are some of my old stuff. I'm no treally into lovesongs and love poems, but I got a dare one day to write a love poem, so this is my first (and probably last Big Grin ) one:

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"A bloodred sunrise, awaking the horizon
Shadows shrink, the darkness run
The winter sun warms the frosty day
And the winter's touch is melted away
Freed my emotions from the icy lake
Felt them again when the ice began to break
You did something to me, it's never been like this before
In a closed world, you opened the door
You released the wave, it washed over me
You've done something to me, can't you see
Big ripples comes from pebbles when dropped in water
As long as I'm with you I'll never falter"

This is a short poem I wrote when I was bored at work once:

Living Dead
"The hour of darkness, the night of pain
Surrounding powers grabs hold of your brain
Sweat on your brow, you know it's here
The walls are breaking; the gathering fear
A power within, can't control it no more
It's buried so deep, it's stuck to the core
In it so deep, no one hears you cry
Swallowed by the silence of a mouth so dry
It's slowly ripping the flesh from the bone
You'll never escape, you're all alone
The pain won't stop, it's splitting your head
You'll never escape; you're the living dead"


And this last one here, is one of the songs that means the most to me.

Most Beautiful of Things
"You couldn't stay
you were forced to leave too soon
always the precious is swept away

Verses:
The sun went down on your horizon
and is not to be risen again
the sky was darkened before you
and now we're the ones in pain

I knew it was inevitable
but still, I couldn't prepare
a forever open wound;
this pain of the loss I bear

PreChorus:
You couldn't stay
you were forced to leave too soon
always the precious is swept away

Chorus:
We live in an unfair world, you didn't deserve this at all
Not a bad bone in your body, it shouldn't have been you to fall
But you're free from your pain now, now you can spread your wings
With all your colors and glory, you're the butterfly -most beautiful of things

Verses:
Things didn't go as they should
but you didn't give up without a fight
many days would come and go
with you holding on to them tight

But the medicine wouldn't hold it forever
and so suddenly you were gone
another warrior had to lower her weapon
cause the pain had gotten far too strong

PreChorus & Chorus

Verses:
I'll have to build a new world
with the memories from the old
I'll do my best, I promise,
to do as I've been told

"Don't be sad because I'm gone,
be happy 'cause I've been allowed to live"
I'll remember those words forever;
the strongest ones you could give

PreChorus & Chorus

Even though you're gone -you're present
and not reserved anymore
now you're released from your pain
and towards the sky you'll soar

You'll return to us in the summer
you're the butterfly that lands on my wall
you're the first to arrive at springtime
and the last to leave us at fall

Now you can spread your wings
with all your colors and glory
you're the butterfly -most beautiful of things"

"More pain and misery in the history of mankind,
sometimes it seems more like the blind leading the blind"
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12-01-2007, 09:18 AM
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Wowww @Shanie..you've made really fantastic poems Wink
They're so wonderful. Wink





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12-01-2007, 02:08 PM
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Corry Wrote:Wowww @Shanie..you've made really fantastic poems Wink
They're so wonderful. Wink

Ahh, thanks! Knuddel Means a lot!

"More pain and misery in the history of mankind,
sometimes it seems more like the blind leading the blind"
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