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Pieces of EyesClosed
05-06-2007, 10:35 AM (This post was last modified: 05-06-2007 07:58 PM by EyesClosed.)
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Pieces of EyesClosed
I've always loved this section Smile

So here are some of my creations, some are songs as well Smile

Departure

He wants to sleep and hears them scream
his eyes hurt and cannot stand the darkness
too sleepy to think about it he gets up
one more night of hatred

There's nothing he can do
he wants to cry
but nobody's gonna hear him
they're somehow lost in their own world,
too far, to care about them.

So go ahead and scream, scream out
all your frustrations
all lost years and wasted times
scream about your love that became hatred

Do they know, they hurt her,
he begins to wonder
and do they know that I still care?
Too many things runnin' through his head

New round and just another fight
Daddy hurt mom and she does cry
"Idiot, how could I marry you
You never loved me and I know that"

So go ahead and scream...

Tell me you loved each other,
how can you hurt her so bad?
And every word you say
makes me wanna die.

Sax - Solo

New kids will be waiting for him
when he comes home
and maybe they're somewhen
Just more important than me.

So go ahead and scream...

Cold water stopped to run over his hands,
he goes to sleep
while daddy leaves
and mommy cries,

she does cry .





Volle Moppe aufn Asphalt


See this girl and see this boy
believe me they fell in love
but actually no-one dared
to make the first step

And sometimes it's too late
ain't no time left, don't wait
Go ahead - don't lose her
you should try it, now or never

Why is it that I'm too shy,
would she ever notice me?
Would she say "yes" if I
Asked her out for a dinner tonight?

Why don't he ask me out?
Well, I'll make the first step
Would ya like to go with me
to that rock concert tonight?

And sometimes ...

Just wanted to buy her flowers
then it all just went too fast
big crash, red lights and pain
a scream that fills the air

And sometimes...

Why the hell does he take so long?
Did he forget me after all?
And she walks up to his house
Where the ambulance passes by






Just two songs at the moment Smile
If you want, I can upload them and give you the link Smile
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05-06-2007, 10:38 AM (This post was last modified: 05-06-2007 10:39 AM by Corry.)
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RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
Thanks for posting your poem honey. Unfortunately I can't read it, to small letters. Cry But I'd like to read your great poem.





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05-06-2007, 05:53 PM
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RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
WOW!!!!! VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!! AniheartAniheartAniheart[/b]
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05-06-2007, 07:58 PM
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RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
edited for you, corry Wink
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05-06-2007, 10:58 PM
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RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
EyesClosed Wrote:edited for you, corry Wink

Oh how sweet my dear. thank you. Knuddel
I'm glad I could read them now because they're wonderfull. Ylinlove
Great poems, the first one is beautiful and thoughing, the second is sweet. Thank you. SmileSmile





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05-07-2007, 04:37 PM
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RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
2 more songs of mine



Tristan
It's you again
somehow expected you
thought you'd enter my room
now that he's gone, too

Some time no see now
almost half a year, I guess
didn't appear here
and now you're back

Tristan now you're back
your kisses taste like melancholy
bitter-sweet and I'm afraid to fall,
scared to fall in love - with you again.

You're only here cuz
I'm all alone again
yeah, we were different
but more than that
a slave of society

Good old friends, right?
Visit me since I was 12
Were caught in your
cold and dead arms

Tristan, now you're back...

They somebody has a soul
when he loves and is loved
hey Tristan, I ain't your girl
stil feel, see, hear him

Emptiness invades me
in the shadows of my doubt
insecure, you're teasin' my soul
forve me into your dark cave
come closer and gasp a cold kiss
- fell again

Hello Tristan, you're really back
caught my soul
brought bitter-sweet mem'ries
of those times
when we were united last time.








Empty piece of paper

An empty piece of paper
ready to be written on
maybe a little painting,
poem, notes or a song.

Nothing special at all
read it if you want to
it just came out of my soul
dedicated to donnou-who

I keep on writing words
comin' out of my mind
this is the better way
there's the real truth to find

What about a melody?
Take the note-paper now
and write down the pain
my heart knows how

I keep on writing words...

Think I've finished now
Lay down the pen
I'm happier now
this comforted me again

Janika F. 11.1.05
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05-07-2007, 07:47 PM
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RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
Wowww...really great lyricks my dear. I love them both. Wonderfull !! Ylinlove





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05-07-2007, 08:17 PM
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RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
Tristan was new to me, Empty piece of paper I remember from the old forum! I love them all! Smile
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05-07-2007, 08:19 PM
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RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
Eyesclosed@ really great an amazing poem.
you were inspiredSmile

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05-11-2007, 12:05 PM
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RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
I want you to smile only for me in a room with thousand others,
I want you to think of me when you listen to a wonderful lovesong,
I want you to know the colors of my eyes even in the dark,
I want you to know how I like my tea or if I like chocolate cookies.

I want you to sleep next to me and dream of me even in the darkest night,
I want you to know my opinion without me telling you,
I want you to buy me flowers though it's not my birthday,
I want you to see on first sight how I feel.

I want you to tell me stories of a better future though there's no tomorrow,
I want you to have my picture in a frame above your desk,
I want you to die after me so I don't have to lose you,
I want you to write my name lost in thoughts when you're on the phone.


I want you to sing a song and sing it only for me,
I want you to make a step and two steps back because I got lost,
I want you to send me a post card when you're on vacations and I'm not,
I want you to forget your things at my home so that my room is a part of your home.



I want you to love me.
Janika F. 8.3.06



This one meant so much to me... I almost forgot about it Big Grin
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05-11-2007, 07:02 PM
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RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
Beautiful amazing great poems Eyesclosed SmileSmile

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05-11-2007, 08:06 PM
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RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
Great lyricks @eyesclosed. It's beautiful !! YlinloveYlinlove





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05-19-2007, 09:58 PM
Post: #13
RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
Another one of today... I'm depressive and this one means much to me. Not easy to interprete but maybe you know what I mean:


Dance


Dance
with me
without a trace.
Without a trace
dance with
me.
Darkness surrender
light.
Dance.
With her
or
yourself.
Scream and
drink.
But
do not dance
with me
again.
And again
I feel
darkness.
Dance
in my
shoes.
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05-19-2007, 11:03 PM
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RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
I understand it, thank you so much for sharing, esp. it means so much to you!Knuddel
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05-29-2007, 08:11 PM
Post: #15
RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
Ah unser Kleiner hat Spaß daran!

Close your eyes
And touch another sky
Different
To your skies.
You’re young
And wanna have
Fun like
Anyone else.
Dance till
Another sky
Comes
Tomorrow.
Don’t stop
With



Seeing through closed eyes.
Because this is your only
Sky.



To touch.
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08-11-2007, 08:25 AM
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RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
:dust:WonderfulBabydust
LuxhelloLuxhelloLuxhello
YlinloveYlinloveYlinlove
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08-11-2007, 11:07 PM
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RE: Pieces of EyesClosed
Both are really beautiful. I like them. Well done. WinkWink





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